“His quiet and desperate need to be liked, to be thought of as a good person in concrete terms, means that he goes through life feeling like there is a gun to his head.”
Fantastic story. :) Having grown up in Bangalore, I loved the settings on Brigade Road and Church Street. That’s the first place I go to now when I visit. :)
Yay was very much going for noir, glad it's coming through! CIA x London firms somehow feels like the least amount of creative licence I've taken here haha. Thank you so much for reading Rohan!
"On a scale of 1 to 10, how moody and subtle can you make a story?"
"Yes."
Hahahaha, thanks a lot for the feedback bhai
Ummm WOW! This is so well done!
“His quiet and desperate need to be liked, to be thought of as a good person in concrete terms, means that he goes through life feeling like there is a gun to his head.”
Learnt so much! Thank you for posting it again!!
High praise coming from you! Thank you so much for reading :)
Fantastic story. :) Having grown up in Bangalore, I loved the settings on Brigade Road and Church Street. That’s the first place I go to now when I visit. :)
How lovely to be read by an old Bangalorean! Thanks so much Amit :)
Love the vibe of this story. Very noir. More please! Raghav and Harpreet feel like they have a novel's worth of story in them.
Also, CIA getting involved in the training contracts handed out by London firms is class haha!
Yay was very much going for noir, glad it's coming through! CIA x London firms somehow feels like the least amount of creative licence I've taken here haha. Thank you so much for reading Rohan!